Here is my resume please tell me what you think

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Hi jim1174 - Would you mind posting your resume directly to this forum? Just remember to remove your personal information and employer names before you post. Thank you!

Name

Address

E-mail Phone number

 

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS

·         Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Access

·         Articulate communicator with strong listening skills

·         Strong research skills including the ability to coordinate and conduct projects

·         Excellent oral and written communication skills

·         Strong interpersonal skills; very effective in group settings

·          Excellent organization, attention to detail, and follow up procedures

·         Ability to multitask and appropriately prioritize job responsibilities

·          Reputation for professionalism, competence and time management

·         Proven ability to work independently and make educated decisions

·         Received numerous awards in recognition for outstanding customer service performance

EMPLOYMENT

employers name  - Pinole, CA 2004 to Pr

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Hi jim1174,

Thanks for posting and bumping this thread! I think your resume is well-organized and a good start, but here are a few ideas for improvement:

- Add a career goal. The reader should immediately know what type of job you're targeting.

- Tailor your summary to your relevant qualifications. If you're seeking a culinary position, I would focus on culinary skills and training. The bullets you provided are very general and could apply to almost any career field.

- Add accomplishments to your work history. Your current work descriptions emphasize your day-to-day job duties, but you can take this to the next level by including the results/outcomes of your work. Did your customer service skills help improve sales? Generate repeat customers? Attract praise and positive feedback from customers? For each of your positions, provide several examples of how your performance contributed to the operation.

One question -- did you omit your degree dates on purpose?

I hope this is helpful!