Any feedback or critique for my resume

 

PROFILE SUMMARY

A challenging and rewarding position where prior experience, personal ability, and a commitment to professionalism would be of value. Position should allow for continued personal and professional growth commensurate with achievements.

SKILLS

Bilingual (Spanish & English), Hiring Process, Team Building, Policies & Procedures, Staff Recruitment & Retention, Administration, Organizational Development, Computer & Selling Skills, Orientation & Benefits,

Training & Development, Performance Management, Career Counseling, Secret Clearance

 

WORK EXPERIENCE

Lincoln Technical Institute

HR/ Admissions Representative                 New Britain, CT                                                                            2012 –current

·         Organized promotion programs and ecommerce for the admission process, registrar and finalize the accounts.

·         Promoted to fulfill a broad range of HR functions, including recruiting and training employees, administering benefits, overseeing disciplinary action and managing HR recordsAdminister and explain benefits to employees and serve as a liaison between employees, corporate or insurance carriers.

·         Ensure that all enrollees comply with the legal requirements of the various benefit programs and laws

·         Manage employee relations.

Hi Mill1476,

Thank you for posting your resume! Your document has some very good information. Here are a few ideas for improvement:

- Create a targeted "Profile Summary" section. The content is currently very general and can apply to virtually any career field. Include your career goal and highlights of your strongest qualifications. You can also mention your MBA in the summary, as this credential is buried at the bottom of your resume.

- Fix errors that appear throughout your resume. For example, the first bullet in your work history section ("Organized promotion programs...") isn't clear and seems to include a couple of different thoughts (promotion programs and ecommerce).

- Take your job bullets to the next level. Instead of focusing on what you were responsible for, write about how well you performed your job duties. For example, you "manage employee relations." Did you improve employee-employer relations? If so, what did you do specifically to improve employee relations? How did the staff or your employer benefit?

I hope this is helpful. Good luck to you!

Thank you I will fix it to improve my changes.

Hi Mill1476,

You're very welcome! Feel free to stop by again if you have questions as you're working on your resume.