In the intro, the first line seems to imply that people bother you - try to make this softer sounding, and relate it directly to what a employer could use.

There is a typo in the qualifications paragraph - two periods after "task."

"Recipient of a..." is a little long winded, you just need "Bachelors of Liberal...."

No need to put your high school.

Change the paragraphs under the positions to bullet points and take out babysitting - that seems unprofessional to an employer.

Place the different category skills (computer, language...), in different lines.